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By far the best story on here, Offy's is the only that ever came close. Shame it had to finish, but looking forward to part II with Brian managing Luton Town

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I'm gutted that you've finished this story; definitely the highest quality story that still gets regularly updated! Thanks for years of great reading mate.

(Also weren't you going to do some authors notes on James' other manage friend? )

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When did he lose 3 grand? I don't remember that part...

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Non update night? I thought you just had a few days off and were still doing daily updates?

Anyways, no worries, great story, and can't wait until the next update.

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That last part made me actually laugh out loud Classic.

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Stop making us wait for updates, I need to know what happens, now! ;-)

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Can't you...just for once...give you characters an easy life? :-P

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Wait...wut? Merthyr Tydfil were miles down the pyramid irl methought, and definitely above Colwyn bay.

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I reckon it's Dimic's daughter...

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The cliffhangers make it so much better...

Just not once you've finished reading it and are waiting for the next instalment

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Nice win!

When did Spencer re-sign for you? I can only remember David Noyes recalling him..I guess I missed something :-P

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Oh, wow. Didn't see that coming, more of just the Inspector finding some stuff that got the club in trouble...

Loving the story, can't wait for what happens next (I hope not the end of the story?)

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I'm planning a drive-by on that keeper, don't worry :-)

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The stories not coming to an end is it? :-(

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More chaos in the press conferences :-D

Love it!

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Luton Town, L2 autautomatic :-D

Chantelles harsh, 300000 buys you an average sized 3bedroom house around here, decoration normally questionable as well...

Still loving the story though :-)

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It seems like he's forgetting that Bambi's just a dog, lol.

Surely someone on 100k can sustain 3 people though; if the mortgage isn't sky high

Great story as usual.

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I think he should go back with Chantelle...

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Oh wow...I really feel sorry for Rory...

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Charlottes Dad's description fits you...Get to the point with Caroline!

Great story btw.

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If you don't update soon then you'll suffer the same treatment as she did.

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I hate you. Cliffhangers=evil. I guess Chantelle for what it's worth. M'heraps James left his card over there...and you totally hate Chantelle.

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I think your being harsh on Chantelle.../me feels sorry for her.

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Aww, I just finished reading this thread. Absolutely amazing.