Keithy1980 Posted January 10, 2016 Share Posted January 10, 2016 I have been doing a save on YouTube which has been uploaded and still going daily about Wycombe Wanderers and i was wondering how interested people were in watching this series I have been enjoying so much. Goto there and click play all ... believe me it was a very nail biting season and still more to be uploaded. I hope the guys of SI don't mind me posting this but it's far better than typing season after season so why not watch me play instead of read eh Don't forget to like and subscribe and keep watching for updates which are daily at 10am GMT. Ask questions i will answer them in future videos. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jimbokav1971 Posted January 11, 2016 Share Posted January 11, 2016 Hi, if I could give some constructive feedback..... In my opinion you need to sound more energised when speaking. If you look at the most popular YouTubers, (at least those that I have seen), the delivery is often more important than the actual content and I don't think you have that balance quite right yet. While your actual game-play and content might interest me, your delivery turns me off. (Apologies and I promise that isn't meant to be a petty dig). If I am honest, I think that if I was to do a YouTube Series, then I might have similar problems. If I was to suggest other YouTubers to look at to act as a comparison, then here are some that you might want to look at. Foxy aka FoxInTheBox is really "Up" and over the top and his delivery really is excellent. DoctorBenjy FM is a little different in that he really uses humour to great effect and the humour and delivery is probably a more important aspect to his style than the actual FM related content itself. Second Yellow Card is someone who I think you could really take some tips from. He's not a kid and while his delivery is serious and more content based than the others, he's actually my favourite YouTuber as he balances well the FM content and the light-hearted moments. To give you an example of a successful YouTuber who I don't like, (he is still successful and it is just my personal tastes that mean I don't enjoy watching his video's), then look at StatApp - FM16. Ignoring issues with his content, there is something about his voice that just grates me a little. It's not his fault. It's just his voice and me being a soft Southerner, I dunno but it just grates on me. He seems very 1-pitched and just seems to go on and on. While your voice doesn't grate on me at all, you are also a little flat in terms of tone, (when compared to the likes of Foxy, Matt & Dr Benjy), and maybe that's something that you could work on. Good luck. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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