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Oh no! Genuinely upset to see this story finish, as it was easily the best one on the forum, against some high-quality competition. So well written - the plots were imaginative, and you found the perfect balance between gripping drama and laugh-out-loud humour.

Every character was fleshed out and utterly believable, to the point where I felt genuine sorrow and shock at the deaths of Caroline and now Alison. This could definitely have been published, no doubt about it.

Are you planning to do another story in the future, time permitting?

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Oh no. Oh god, no...

Another brilliant story arc - you have so many and they all weave seamlessly together, hats off to you.

I can't wait to read (through my fingers!) how this turns out.

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Hi ScottleeSV, I've been a silent reader of your story for a long time and it's about time I spoke to show my appreciation. I have to say that it's not just the best FM story I've read but also one of the most enjoyable stories of any kind that I've read. Your characters are vivid and distinctive, the different story arcs you have show wonderful imagination and there are many times I've laughed out loud at your brilliant writing (not good when I'm supposed to be hard at work in the office!). It's no understatement to say that this could easily be turned into a TV series. Please don't ever stop.