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Ahahaha... haha... hah.... Excellent use of anticlimax. Me gusta.

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Daaaaaaaaangit Scott, why must you do this?! Don't answer that. It makes this amazing story just that much better, these cliffhangers. Gripping stuff!

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Oh no... *gleefully awaits part 2

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Caught up again mate, amazing as always, was without a comp for a couple of months (which completely derailed my Iceland career thread) so it was good to have this to read again! Actually just played Luton in FM '12, they beat my Stevenage side at Kenilworth 5-3, cracking match. And Keith Keane is still there. Question: did you pick him as a story antagonist just at random from the Luton players or was it on a FM mental stat?

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Aww... I knew I'd hit this point eventually but while I was having a fair chunk of my free time consumed for the past three days it was a cracking read. Even before I'd hit the end it'd inspired me to start my own story, although I probably should've written more before posting the start... Might have to resurrect it later when I have tangible amounts of creativity and free time simultaneously. But this is absolutely fantastic stuff and the amount of time you've kept this going is amazing. My hat's off to you!

Have you ever considered writing for a crackpot tabloid in your spare time?