Jazzinho Posted December 10, 2010 Share Posted December 10, 2010 Hello everybody, This is my second season ever with FM so i am not so good as the most here and my english to. do you have tips for me, send plzzz:thup: Part 1 of season 10-11 come soon! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzinho Posted December 16, 2010 Author Share Posted December 16, 2010 FINALLY PART 1 It is march 12 1963 when Evan Cellam was born. He came when he was 13 years old by Crystal Palace. 5 years later he make his debut for Crystal Palace. Evan Cellam played for: Crystal Palace,Spurs,Athletic Bilbao,Spurs,Ajax and he ended his career in Crystal Palace. His prizes FA Cup with Tottenham Hotspurs, Spanish cup with Atlethic Bilbao, The Europe cup 1 with Ajax , Won the Dutch title with Ajax, Won the Dutch cup with Ajax, And won nothing with Crystal Palace. Juli I was very happy to become a manager for Everton. It is a great club to manage. The Youth players are GREAT:thup: Star players Heitinga Best defender Marouane Fellaini Arteta Tim Cahill the Owning Midfield Saha my best striker My transfers in Juli Out Steven Pienaar to Aston Villa - 4.2 M In No players but in August you see more Luit Zwaneveld a good scout from FC Groningen First practise games in Juli V Brendford 0-2 win - Vaughan, Barkley V Alloa 1-4 win - Gueye, Beckford 3X now in Everton B V Preston 0-3 win - P. Neville, Saha, Cahill V Coleraine 1-6 win - Agard 4X, Yakubu, Pienaar Tactic 4-4-2 Yakubu Saha Templeton Fellaini Cahill Arteta Baines Jagielka Hetinga P Neville Howard August come soon! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark wilson27 Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 I understand that you said you English wasnt great so I can let that go..However you've got to be careful that this doesnt become a results thread, we need alittle more detail than what youve put. Look at Faramirs work, hes one of the feew writers I look at when I first started Heres a linky to his work http://community.sigames.com/showthread.php/20894-Shine-Like-the-Stars-Harrow-Hill-in-FM-08 EDIT: If you want any advice feel free to PM me and I'll try and help so we dont clog up your thread Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzinho Posted December 16, 2010 Author Share Posted December 16, 2010 oke thnx part 2 August will be more detailed Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gavrenwick Posted December 16, 2010 Share Posted December 16, 2010 Yeah, Mark is right. You need much more detail, and definitely a structure so it isn't so congealed and confusing to look at. Good luck though, Jazzinho. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jazzinho Posted December 16, 2010 Author Share Posted December 16, 2010 thnx Mark and Gavrenwick Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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