coolmoose Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 Wonder what Anthony Stokes will do when he sees Ben at Sunderland Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted December 6, 2007 Author Share Posted December 6, 2007 <BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by milanfan_apoorv: mebbe its was better if you left the story ben are you depressed or something? seems to be spilling over to your story enjoy yourself at the "sandhurst of singapore". </div></BLOCKQUOTE> No Apoorv, I meant for it to be like that. Ben in the story is going through a rough patch. I'm absolutely fine IRL. coolmoose, answer will be revealed shortly. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
coldkohmew Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 <BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by coolmoose: Wonder what Anthony Stokes will do when he sees Ben at Sunderland </div></BLOCKQUOTE> I think he had already asked for a free transfer Wonder if Ben will change nationality... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amaroq Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 Depression is a perfectly fine trait for a story character; my own Ian Richards has gone through a rough patch the last two or three pages, too. Glad to know you're fine IRL, Ben. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted December 7, 2007 Author Share Posted December 7, 2007 Thanks guys for the comments. And so, with Ben still in a huff, he made his way to the Stadium of Light to meet the manager, Mr Roy Keane. "Good morning Sir." he muttered, trying not to expose his still boiling emotions, bearing in mind the reputation Keano has. "Good morning Ben. No need for the niceties. Call me Roy." Keane's chirpiness took Ben by surprise. "C'mon boy, I'll take you to the training ground to meet some of the lads." he continued. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted December 7, 2007 Author Share Posted December 7, 2007 At the training ground, the Sunderland players were up and about with their morning training. "Feel free to mingle about, and get to know some of them. I have some work to do in the office, but I'll come and check on you in a while." Keane suggessted. And so, Ben walked around the training pitch, trying to identify the faces he knew, and introduce himself to them. Just then, a guy staggered across towards Ben. "Eye, ain't youse that bloke who woz at the Arsenal?" He appeared drunk as he slurred. "Erm, you are?" Ben asked. "Stoko mate. Wha' ya doing 'ere, ya Asian ****?" he answered. And Ben realised it was his old enemy once again, Anthony Stokes. "Look, you young upstart. I'm not in the best of moods, so don't take the ****." Ben reacted, still a bit miffed about the morning's events. "Wha', the Arsenal ain't good enough for ya? Or ya wanna rematch? C'mon lad, I'll take ya! C'mon!" Stokes threw a few pretend punches Ben's way. "Look, I'm not looking for any aggro here..." But before Ben could finish his sentence, Stokes threw a punch across his face, perhaps accidental due to his drunk state. That really riled Ben up, and he swiftly countered, and it soon turned into a full-on brawl, with the surrounding players trying to split the two warring players up. "Oi oi oi! What's going on?!" Keane roared as he emerged from his office back onto the pitch. As soon as he realised what had happened, he ordered, "Ben, I want to see you in my office now. Stokes, go bloody home! You're suspended from the next match!" Ben's day was going from bad to worse. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted December 8, 2007 Share Posted December 8, 2007 screw dat motha******!! yeah!! ya gotta do some chin checkin' knamean? too much boondocks again Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted December 10, 2007 Author Share Posted December 10, 2007 In Keane's office... "Ben, I know you have a bit of history with Anthony, but you have to understand we don't condone such practices here." Keane started. You're one to speak, Ben thought, images of Roy Keane's own playing career springing to his mind. But he kept schtum, wisely. "B..but, he started it first!" Ben protested. "I don't care who started it first. Discipline is of utmost importance here." Keane reiterated. "The thing is, Stokes is a player under contract, so we could hand out a relevant punishment." "However, as you are not a player under contract with us, I'm afraid I won't be able to sign you, as it would be sending out a wrong message. It might seem that I would be condoning your actions if I do offer you a contract." Ben was shattered. What was going on? "So regretfully, I'm afraid that I have to send you back to Arsenal. I'm sorry it hasn't worked out. I wish you all the best, and hoped you learnt your lesson." Ben was stunned. It seemed like an injustice that Stokes was the perpetrator but was only given a slap on the wrist, but Ben being the victim was made to pay. He felt slighted by it all. "Thank you Sir." he muttered as he shuffled out the door, head hung low. The unfairness of it all... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted December 10, 2007 Author Share Posted December 10, 2007 Back at Arsenal... Arsene Wenger was livid. "What on earth were you thinking?" he shouted at Ben. Ben was shocked. He had never seen Wenger so angry before, and it left him speechless. "I'm sorry boss." he wimpered. "Sorry?! You've ruined your future young man! It's all over the news and now no club in England will want to take you on now." Wenger pointed out. The reality struck Ben hard. It was true in a way. Everybody in England knew about it, and Ben's reputation as a trouble maker will work against him finding another club willing to take him on loan. "You leave me no choice. I'm going to send you to our American feeder club in Los Angeles." Wenger stated. "B..but, they're not playing football there now!" Ben protested. It was the MLS off season, and there wouldn't be any games for three months. "All the more time for you to think about your actions!" Wenger roared. Ben knew there wasn't any use arguing with his boss, and so accepted his punishment. He was to pack his bags and fly out to join the LA Galaxy the next day. As he trooped out of Wenger's office dejectedly, he thought, What have I done now? Is my career ruined? Will I ever play a senior game for Arsenal? Or anyone else for that matter? Some serious soul searching was needed. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kairyu Posted December 10, 2007 Share Posted December 10, 2007 Man, I was afraid something like this might happen..... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted December 11, 2007 Share Posted December 11, 2007 STOP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!! you need professional help!! this is too depressing!! (unless of course Rachel gets forgotten and Ben gets jiggy with all those hollywood females out there) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted December 11, 2007 Author Share Posted December 11, 2007 I am fine Apoorv. Ben is hitting a low point in the story. But what goes down must come up surely, so just be patient. And, ahem, he might get some jiggy with the Americans... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted December 11, 2007 Share Posted December 11, 2007 get some jiggy ben?? like I said, professional help Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoose Posted December 11, 2007 Share Posted December 11, 2007 <BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by milanfan_apoorv: screw dat motha******!! yeah!! ya gotta do some chin checkin' knamean? too much boondocks again </div></BLOCKQUOTE> um... what? Oh well done Ben . Thrown away your career. Will this jiggyness be censored? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
coldkohmew Posted December 11, 2007 Share Posted December 11, 2007 wonder if ben and beckham will work well... and when will he be against arsenal... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted December 11, 2007 Author Share Posted December 11, 2007 Ho hum. More misery... Ben faced a lonely trip to LA. There wasn't anyone to see him off at Heathrow. No one to accompany him there. It was to be a long, lonely flight. No Rachel with him as well. Still, it meant time for him to reflect upon himself. The only bright spot was the possibility of working with David Beckham. And LA was also a city full of entertainment, so he couldn't possibly be bored. But he had to be focused. He had to put his career back on track, and not be distracted by other things. Easier said than done though... I'll be taking a short break from writing during the holidays, but I hope to be back soon. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted December 12, 2007 Share Posted December 12, 2007 coolmoose, The Boondocks was a comic strip and is now an animated T.V. series. It's about these two black brothers, Huey and Riley, who move from the south side of chicago to the 'blindingly white' suburb of woodcrest. Huey is a Neo Malcolm X/Huey P. Newton (who Huey claim is his namesake). Riley on the other hand is an eight year old foul mouthed wanna be gangsta rapper. find out more about it here. Cheers! BTW when will you be back chia? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoose Posted December 12, 2007 Share Posted December 12, 2007 cheers apoorv. Makes much more sense to me now Um, and I have an Indian friend and I was just wondering. Do you know what Remo is/are? Have a good holiday Ben, and make sure that you take care of your typing fingers Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted December 14, 2007 Share Posted December 14, 2007 erm.... Remo? no idea....... if you could be specific?? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted December 31, 2007 Share Posted December 31, 2007 <prod> <prod> <prod> holiday over innit Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.H. Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 nice story! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheWokingLegend Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 <BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content"><prod> <prod> <prod> holiday over innit </div></BLOCKQUOTE> lol i agree Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burgess Basso Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 i agree hurry up lol Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoose Posted January 2, 2008 Share Posted January 2, 2008 <BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by milanfan_apoorv: <prod> <prod> <prod> holiday over innit </div></BLOCKQUOTE> He used to liste nto this song and in the chorus they went "Rainbow Remo". Just thought I might ask. And yes, hliday is over Ben. Workers are back at work and all. Not wanting to rush you though Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 2, 2008 Author Share Posted January 2, 2008 Hi guys. Thanks for the comments. Really sorry, but I'm still a bit busy lately. I'll try to get an update ASAP, possibly next week. Apologies again. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted January 5, 2008 Share Posted January 5, 2008 no problem, as long as there IS a update Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted January 9, 2008 Share Posted January 9, 2008 weeks up! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 9, 2008 Author Share Posted January 9, 2008 Friday, I promise. Sorry. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 9, 2008 Author Share Posted January 9, 2008 Okay, I'm gonna do something a bit interesting. It's a brief recap, done in the style of newspaper reports. When he first signed: The Sun - Arsenal Sign Jungle Boy Arsenal are due to appear at a hearing to appeal for a work permit for their recently discovered talent, from the South East Asian jungle state of Singapore. 20 year old Ben Cee comes with no previous professional playing experience, and his signing is seen as a risk, or even a mistake, for the normally astute Arsene Wenger. When he went out on loan: The Sun - Jungle Boy to return home Arsenal's young Singaporean defender Ben Cee is to return to his homeland of Singpore on loan in order to gain some playing experience. He will spend the next six months playing for his hometown club Woodlands Wellington in the Singapore League. One wonders whether he has enough quality to cut it as a professional footballer, let alone for one of the biggest clubs in the world. After his first bust up with Anthony Stokes: Sky Sports News - Cee in training ground bust-up Arsenal have agreed a fee with Sunderland for young striker Anthony Stokes. Sources have reported that Stokes was involved with a bust-up with Singaporean Ben Cee, which has left the young defender out injured for a significent period of time. Though there has been no official comment from the club or the players involved, newspapers have started to question Wenger's overprotectiveness of Cee. When he went to watch Arsenal play Liverpool at Anfield: The Daily Mail - WHO'S THAT GIRL I CEE? Young Arsenal defender Ben Cee was spotted with a mystery lass at Anfield over the weekend. Questions have now been raised over the Singaporean's true intentions of coming to Britain, with reports claiming that he's just here to leech money from clubs and waste it all on girls. When he had a pre-season bust-up with Wenger: The Sun - EXCLUSIVE! BEN CEE AND WENGER IN BUST UP! Arsenal defender Ben Cee was left out of the team squad that headed out to Austria for pre-season training yesterday. Reports have mentioned that the young Singaporean had an amazing bust up with manager Arsene Wenger over Ben's 'girlfriend'. Apparantly Wenger refused permission for Ben to bring his girl to Austria, which infuriated Cee and led to the argument. Could this finally mean the end of this young man's Arsenal career? When he made his debut against Hamburg in a pre-season friendly: The Daily Mirror - Young Guns fail to get past Germans Arsenal's youngsters today went down 2-1 to German side Hamburg at the Emirates today in the Emirates Cup tournament. After their magnificent win against Inter Milan yesterday, Arsene Wenger decided to rest his stars and put out a young side against the Germans. Young Singaporean defender Ben Cee made his long-awaited debut at right back, but his inexperience was telling, letting in two quick goals from laymaker Rafael van der Vaart. Midfielder Marc Randall scored a superb goal in return, but ultimately the Gunners paid the price for putting out a weakened team. When he wanted to leave Arsenal out on loan: The Daily Telegraph - Ben Cee to leave Arsenal Arsenal's young Singaporean defender Ben Cee's future is in doubt as he is said to be unhappy with the lack of first team opportunities. He has requested a move away from the Emirates in order to further his footballing career, or lack thereof. Manager Arsene Wenger is said to be willing to let him go out on loan and Sunderland are among the clubs currently interested in the right back who can play anywhere across the defence. After his second bust up with Anthony Stokes at Sunderland: The Mirror - ARSENAL STAR SENT BACK IN DISGRACE! Arsenal defender Ben Cee's hopes of securing a loan move to Sunderland were scuppered today after yet another training ground bust up WITH THE SAME GUY. Anthony Stokes, apparantely drunk, insulted Ben with a few choice words, leading to a brawl which had to be stopped by the other Sunderland players and manager Roy Keane. Stokes and Cee have clashed before while bothe were at Arsenal, and in fact was the reason Stokes was shipped out of the Emirates. Keane is said to be disappointed with Cee and has duly sent the defender back to London. With the transfer deadline looming and Ben's reputation now in tatters after this latest incident, will his career finally be over? After he was sent to America by Wenger in anger: The Times - Cee sent to Hollywood Arsenal has sent defender Ben Cee to Los Angeles Galaxy in America after his well publicised bust-up at Sunderland. Manager Arsene Wenger was said to be furious with Ben's behaviour and has sent him across the Atlantic for him to 'wake up his idea'. With no games in the MLS until April, will Ben be distracted by the wayward Hollywood lifestyle? Could this decision backfire on Wenger, and ruin Ben once and for all? P.S. Arsenal has an MLS feeder club IRL, but it's actually the Colorado Rapids, and not LA Galaxy. But there's a reason why I sent him to LA, so watch this space. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted January 10, 2008 Share Posted January 10, 2008 cannae wait Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoose Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 apoorv has gone cottish \o/ . Nice upate there Ben. I lkied the who's that girl I cee? headline Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 scottish you mean Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spurs Revival Posted January 16, 2008 Share Posted January 16, 2008 dood ur story is good. but its so slow... when is he actually gonna play a single game? or make a difference in a game? he's been struggling so long.. why does arsene even bother with him?? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 17, 2008 Author Share Posted January 17, 2008 He has played, just not made his official debut yet. I'm sorry, but there's been a lot going on for me lately, hence the lack of updates. I'll really try to think of something as soon as possible, but I can't guarantee when I'll be free next. I hardly even have time to play FM now... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 why don't you just close this then? Itll be easier for you and we can stop hoping. it lasted a respectable time, ben Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 17, 2008 Author Share Posted January 17, 2008 Well, if you guys wanna... I could say he died in a plane crash on the way to LA and it'll be the end of that. Or do some of you want it continued? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murrayzoster Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 I want you to contiune your story. 10/10 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cristian0 Ren Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 please continue the story!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
HunterKiller Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 Keep it going Ben Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 17, 2008 Author Share Posted January 17, 2008 Hey guys. I'm really sorry, but I don't think I'll be able to find the time to continue this. I really don't want this to end, but I suppose it's for the best, instead of leaving you guys hanging. Alternatively, you guys can be creative and continue it for me, since it's fictional and it's only limited to your imagination. My ending for Ben would be simple (if I choose to end it): Ben was depressed after being sent to LA that he retired from football. It's been a fun run. I hope you guys enjoyed reading as much as I enjoyed writing. Cheers and thanks for the support. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
HunterKiller Posted January 18, 2008 Share Posted January 18, 2008 BOOOO!!!! Only kidding Ben, was a great story while it lasted. Any plans to write another? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 18, 2008 Author Share Posted January 18, 2008 I'm not sure. Probably when I'm free, but quite likely not online. I do have hopes of writing my own book someday. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burgess Basso Posted January 20, 2008 Share Posted January 20, 2008 brill story m8 good luck Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolmoose Posted January 20, 2008 Share Posted January 20, 2008 was a good story ben. I'll be sad to see it stop but its up to you and all. was great while it lasted Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted January 21, 2008 Share Posted January 21, 2008 sent you a mail on your listed IDben please check. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
milanfan_apoorv Posted January 21, 2008 Share Posted January 21, 2008 it bounced. gimme another one. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BenArsenal Posted January 21, 2008 Author Share Posted January 21, 2008 <BLOCKQUOTE class="ip-ubbcode-quote"><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-title">quote:</div><div class="ip-ubbcode-quote-content">Originally posted by milanfan_apoorv: sent you a mail on your listed IDben please check. </div></BLOCKQUOTE> That email add is a dummy. Send it to benchia.ase(at)gmail.com Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrenter Posted January 21, 2008 Share Posted January 21, 2008 i just read 9 pages of that and it has no ending. good effort though fella!! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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